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A类小作文

[作文类型] 柱状图

[作文标题] The graph below shows the support rate of four solutions to global warming in four European countries.

图表依据四个国家分四组,对每组组内对四种办法的支撑程度别离列柱进行比照。

[归纳点评] 此类柱状图主张从组内和组间的两种比照方法下手,留意每种解决计划最受欢迎和最不受欢迎的数据进行要点着重。主张主体段一段依据不同计划进行组间比照,主体段二段分不同国家进行组内比照,总结段再对特别数据进行要点着重。柱状图的写作中需求留意杰出数据间的排名联系和距离。

A类大作文

[作文标题] Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?

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幸运彩票有几种版本-原创2019年7月27日雅思写作考试点评剖析!

[标题剖析] 混合类题型,需求分段针对两个问题别离作答

[体裁类别] 教育类

[思路剖析] TR部分得分要点在于论说爸爸妈妈无限给孩子满足要求的利害和久远的损害,留意题干首句中躲藏的or决议了文章需求依据“孩子要求”和幸运彩票有几种版本-原创2019年7月27日雅思写作考试点评剖析!“孩子想要做的工作”别离论说。主体段首段作答第一小问,第二段作答第二小问。

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Some children are having all their wishes granted by their parents, be it something they want or something they want to do. In my opinion, this tends to be detrimental to the children’s growth and could have disastrous effects to them in the long term.

First of all, it’s undeniable that parents are to provide and fulfill the necessary needs幸运彩票有几种版本-原创2019年7月27日雅思写作考试点评剖析! and wishes of children, whether it’s some snacks or a taking them to a park. However, taking a step further and becoming the Genie in Aladdin could significantly obstruct the development of children’s sense of finite and boundaries. The first attribute, from my pers幸运彩票有几种版本-原创2019年7月27日雅思写作考试点评剖析!pective, is achieved through denying their unreasonable requests, for example, tons of snacks every day, which effectively demonstrated how both the parents’ resources and abilities are finite. Whilst understanding the second could not be accomp幸运彩票有几种版本-原创2019年7月27日雅思写作考试点评剖析!lished unless the inappropriate activities, say, littering in the park, are stopped. The parents could set up the idea of boundaries in such way.

With the abs幸运彩票有几种版本-原创2019年7月27日雅思写作考试点评剖析!ence of such senses, the children could grow up to be greedy and lawless adults. Unable to understand the idea of finite, there will be a tendency for children to demand more from their parents, for toy cars to actual cars, which, in the end, will destroy the family economically. On the other hand, adults who spurn at idea of boundaries could do the same to laws, which will lead to catastrophic results, including serious crimes that destabilizes the society. Many who committed crimes wouldn’t acknowledge that what they’ve done are wrong, as the idea of boundaries hasn’t been installed by their parents in the first place.

In conclusion, for parents, the question of whether the wishes of children should be granted must be carefully deliberated to install the essential idea of finite and boundaries in the children’s development. For those who wouldn’t say no to their kids are likely to raise up a group of greedy and lawless adults that will be rejected by the society.

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